Monday 27 May 2013

Exciting Sentences!!

In writing we have been working on writing interesting sentences. Here are some of the best sentences for:      The boy went up the stairs.

The tired boy stumbled up the never ending stairs.
By Tahlia

The hyper boy marched up the rickety, old stairs.
By Lauren

The infuriated boy thundered up the creaky, wooden stairs.
By Lucy

The grouchy boy trudged slowly up the old, creaky staircase.
By Shevana

The terrified boy slowly shuffled up the old, creaky stairs.
By Jimmy

Please comment on what you think of these awesome sentences!!

Posted by Maggie and Lauren.

10 comments:

  1. God what very interesting sentences, you guys really made them better than what it was.
    Hayley

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  2. I wasn't there when you guys did those sentences but they sound great!! You must have been working hard!!!
    Jordana

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  3. Great sentences guys!!! I missed out on doing them too but they have had a lot of thought and description put into them!!
    Well done :-)
    Maggie

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  4. Great sentences guys!!! I missed out on doing them too but they have had a lot of thought and description put into them!!
    Well done :-)
    Maggie

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  5. Good job getting your sentences on the blog Tahlia, Lauren, Shavana and Jimmy. I especially like Lucy's.

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  6. Wow these are really good they are very creative keep up the good work!

    Laura

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  7. I think all the class put a lot of thought into their sentences and they sound great!

    Lauren

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  8. Good job everyone! I think that all of the class put a lot of effort into their sentences and they look great!

    Lauren

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  9. Congrats guys good sentences


    Josh.N

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  10. Nice sentences.
    Xavier

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