Monday 25 March 2013

Super similes

Eagle similes from Jordanas poetry book
This week we are looking at writing similes.
We are trying to use similes to make our writing more interesting,
and add more meaning to what we are writing.
We have been writing similes about eagles.

Zane wrote "The eagles has an eye sight like a radar detector."

Emily said "The eagles beak is as pointy and hard as nails."

Jordana wrote "As the eagle soars through the air it is as if it has jet engines concealed in it's wings"

Caleb.O said "The birds razor sharp claws clings to the rugged rock like a baby clinging to its mum."

These are fantastic similes, can you think of any that have not already been mentioned?

11 comments:

  1. Great similies guys.
    Xavier

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  2. well done guys these sound awesome

    Georgia w

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  3. Wow awesome similes guys.
    "The eagles feathers were as dark as melted chocolate"
    Hayley

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    1. Well done Hayley your similes are great to
      Zane

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  4. "The eagles claws were as sharp as knives"
    "The eagles claws were stuck into the rocks like a axe stuck in a piece of wood.
    Hayley

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  5. WOW awesome jordana and you all did fantastic similes great job :)

    Laura

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  6. The eagle dived to its prey like my dog and a bone!!!

    Lauren

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  7. Great similes guys and girls their really good. They really give me and my mom (American spelling) a great idea of how powerful they are. Last year I did a 3 week project on eagles.

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  8. Sorry that was mine I have a bad habit of not putting my name down after a blog comment.

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  9. The eagle dives as fast as a meteorite.
    It also dive as silent as an owl in the night.

    It's beak is like a spear.
    This is why it has no fear.

    It eyes are like telescopes.
    It see's what it may
    From 5 miles away

    The eagle is the leader of birds of prey
    This is how it will stay.

    Derek

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  10. Awesome similes every one!!!
    Maria

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