Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Crafting powerful sentences

In writing we have been learning how to write interesting sentences by changing boring ones!
We used a dependent clause, verbs and adjectives to create an interesting mood.

Here are some most interesting ways to write
  The boy went up the stairs.

Josh wrote; With a burning red face, the boy destructively stomped up what was left of the stairs.

Angel wrote; With a shiver to his spine, the terrified boy creeped up the old dusty staircase.

Harry wrote; Hot on his heels, the boy cascaded up to the top of the stairs.

Bree.A wrote; Emotions running wild, the boy stormed up the depressing stairs.

6 comments:

  1. It was great learning how you could change a sentence.
    Harry

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  2. Thanks for posting my sentence as as an example. Makes me really happy!

    -Angel

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  3. I liked hearing everyone's sentences.
    Bree a

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  4. I think they are cool
    caleb

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  5. I think there really cool

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  6. Cool sentences!!
    Serina:)

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