In writing we have been learning how to write interesting sentences by changing boring ones!
We used a dependent clause, verbs and adjectives to create an interesting mood.
Here are some most interesting ways to write
The boy went up the stairs.
Josh wrote; With a burning red face, the boy destructively stomped up what was left of the stairs.
Angel wrote; With a shiver to his spine, the terrified boy creeped up the old dusty staircase.
Harry wrote; Hot on his heels, the boy cascaded up to the top of the stairs.
Bree.A wrote; Emotions running wild, the boy stormed up the depressing stairs.
It was great learning how you could change a sentence.
ReplyDeleteHarry
Thanks for posting my sentence as as an example. Makes me really happy!
ReplyDelete-Angel
I liked hearing everyone's sentences.
ReplyDeleteBree a
I think they are cool
ReplyDeletecaleb
I think there really cool
ReplyDeleteCool sentences!!
ReplyDeleteSerina:)