Tuesday 18 June 2013

Personification sentences

Today we looked at different pictures and wrote sentences using personification.
Check out some of their writing.
The pecky seagulls searched for an afternoon snack in the glistening sunset. -Josh.B
The beautiful orange sun dimmed over the calm water. -Shaun
The tiny birds invaded the peoples privacy. -Shevana
The deep blue waves softly crashed down with caution on the grainy sand. - Taine
The lit up sun walked to its next destination. - Lauren
The yellow sun reflects on the water. - William
The furious violet clouds let out murderous sparks of rage across the night sky. - Jordana
The bright lightening stroked the tips of the building. - Lucy
The lightening bolts danced over the city. - Caleb.M
The blistering lightening crept from the colourful sky. - Caleb.O


Her long hair danced in the strong wind. - Maria
The lightening sprang from the clouds as fast as a tiger on steroids. - Georgia
The colourful leaves were dancing in the wind. - Laura
The dark, fragile leaves darted in the wind. - Tahlia
Her hair snaked away. - Philip

The house raged with exploding heat. - Derek
The flames flew up at 100km per hour. - Daniel
The vibrant orange flames licked every part of the building. -Maggie
The horrifying fire danced on the burning house. - Emily
The house slowly died as the flames consumed it bit by bit. - Hayley
The fire spread as quick as a cheetah.- Xavier
The angry blistering fire swallowed the entire house. - Chayden




Can you spot the personification words???



8 comments:

  1. I think everybody did a great job writing their sentences, some of them are amazing! Well done everyone.
    Hayley

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  2. There is some great use of personification sed in these sentences everyone!!! Great job ;)

    Lauren

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  3. Can anyone identify any words that show personification? Miss B

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  4. Danced, swallowed, licked, crept, caution.
    That's only some of them.
    Hayley

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  5. For the last picture:

    Raged
    Flew
    Licked
    Danced
    Died
    Spread
    Swallowed


    Lauren

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  6. Everyone has a personification and on is danced

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  7. Everyone had a personification but on is danced.
    Xavier

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  8. Great sentences guys! Great use of persification everyone! Everyone did an amazing job!
    Jordana

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