Tuesday, 19 March 2013

NZ Icon Poems

The kiwi is a beautiful bird
Or that is what I've heard
This bird is very shy
And it cannot fly

 It never plays during the day
But when people see it they say HURRAY!
The kiwi has a very long beak
Their population is growing weak

 By Emily


Kiwifruit is called a gooseberry
It is very hairy
It grows on a vine
But often in a short time

 The kiwifruit is brown
It is also a noun
The kiwifruit is yummy
and good for our tummy

 By Phillip


I went there every passing day
A wonderful beach named Ligar Bay
Every grain on that marvelous beach
Was colourful sand like a golden peach

 The passion and creativity of a castle of sand
Created on a the softness of the sea's precious land
My favourite icon of fun and play
Reminds me of an awesome kiwi beach day!

 By Taine
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 March 2013 at 17:50

    wow these look awesome well done


    Georgia

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  2. Anonymous19 March 2013 at 18:49

    They are all very well done I cant wait to actually read the poems.
    Hayley

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  3. Anonymous20 March 2013 at 07:09

    These icons are all about New Zealand. Well done!!
    Xavier

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  4. Anonymous20 March 2013 at 15:34

    Awesome poems!
    All the sentences are very creative!!!

    Maria

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  5. Anonymous20 March 2013 at 17:09

    Great job you all did well I also liked the pictures :)

    Laura

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  6. Anonymous20 March 2013 at 19:14

    Great job everyone the poems are amazing!!!
    Good descriptive words too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Lauren

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  7. Anonymous24 March 2013 at 13:03

    Great work Emily, Philip and Tain. They are very good. But best of all good job getting them handed in before the rest of the class.

    Derek

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  8. Anonymous25 March 2013 at 18:19

    I've read these four times and their still interesting.

    Derek.

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