Today we looked at different pictures and wrote sentences using personification.
Check out some of their writing.
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The pecky seagulls searched for an afternoon snack in the glistening sunset. -Josh.B
The beautiful orange sun dimmed over the calm water. -Shaun
The tiny birds invaded the peoples privacy. -Shevana
The deep blue waves softly crashed down with caution on the grainy sand. - Taine
The lit up sun walked to its next destination. - Lauren
The yellow sun reflects on the water. - William |
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The furious violet clouds let out murderous sparks of rage across the night sky. - Jordana
The bright lightening stroked the tips of the building. - Lucy
The lightening bolts danced over the city. - Caleb.M
The blistering lightening crept from the colourful sky. - Caleb.O
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Her long hair danced in the strong wind. - Maria
The lightening sprang from the clouds as fast as a tiger on steroids. - Georgia
The colourful leaves were dancing in the wind. - Laura
The dark, fragile leaves darted in the wind. - Tahlia
Her hair snaked away. - Philip
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The house raged with exploding heat. - Derek
The flames flew up at 100km per hour. - Daniel
The vibrant orange flames licked every part of the building. -Maggie
The horrifying fire danced on the burning house. - Emily
The house slowly died as the flames consumed it bit by bit. - Hayley
The fire spread as quick as a cheetah.- Xavier
The angry blistering fire swallowed the entire house. - Chayden
Can you spot the personification words??? |
I think everybody did a great job writing their sentences, some of them are amazing! Well done everyone.
ReplyDeleteHayley
There is some great use of personification sed in these sentences everyone!!! Great job ;)
ReplyDeleteLauren
Can anyone identify any words that show personification? Miss B
ReplyDeleteDanced, swallowed, licked, crept, caution.
ReplyDeleteThat's only some of them.
Hayley
For the last picture:
ReplyDeleteRaged
Flew
Licked
Danced
Died
Spread
Swallowed
Lauren
Everyone has a personification and on is danced
ReplyDeleteEveryone had a personification but on is danced.
ReplyDeleteXavier
Great sentences guys! Great use of persification everyone! Everyone did an amazing job!
ReplyDeleteJordana