Here is an example of the poems we have been writing in class this week.
I really like how Caleb has made his poem flow! Well done Caleb.
I am a boy who loves basketball.
I wonder if I will make the under 15 reps
I hear people cheering as I dribble down the court.
I see a defender trying to steal the ball.
I want to be a professional basketball player.
I am a year 8 who loves guitar.
I pretend I’m a rockstar with my amp on full blast.
I feel good when people clap after I play.
I touch the strings of my guitar as I strum to the music.
I am a softballer who loves to pitch.
I understand the rules of the game.
I say friendly words of encouragement to my team mates.
I dream of smacking a super homerun.
I try my hardest in every game.
I hope to win every time.
I am a 12 year old who loves to play.
Remember to leave him a comment.
Awesome poem Caleb.
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cool poem Caleb
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cool pome. matt
ReplyDeleteNice poem Caleb. Ryan
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ReplyDeletecool poem caleb.-caleby
ReplyDeleteVery cool poem Caleb. -Sam
ReplyDeleteIt would be helpful if we told Caleb what makes is nice, or cool? Miss B
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem Caleb. Jordy
ReplyDeleteGreat pome Caleb i think its cool how you stuck to the same theam for each verse. It really made the whole pome go nice and smoothly. Kirsten
ReplyDeleteKool poem caleb. Anna
ReplyDeleteWow, thats an awesome poem caleb!!. Greer
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