Wednesday, 15 February 2012

I am Poem by Caleb.F

Here is an example of the poems we have been writing in class this week.
I really like how Caleb has made his poem flow! Well done Caleb.

I am a boy who loves basketball.
I wonder if I will make the under 15 reps
I hear people cheering as I dribble down the court.
I see a defender trying to steal the ball.
I want to be a professional basketball player.

I am a year 8 who loves guitar.
I pretend I’m a rockstar with my amp on full blast.
I feel good when people clap after I play.
I touch the strings of my guitar as I strum to the music.

I am a softballer who loves to pitch.
I understand the rules of the game.
I say friendly words of encouragement to my team mates.
I dream of smacking a super homerun.
I try my hardest in every game.
I hope to win every time.
I am a 12 year old who loves to play.

Remember to leave him a comment.

12 comments:

  1. Awesome poem Caleb.
    Brandon hart

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  2. cool poem Caleb
    Alex

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  3. cool pome. matt

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  4. Nice poem Caleb. Ryan

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  5. Nice poem Caleb-Jaeger

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  6. cool poem caleb.-caleby

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  7. Very cool poem Caleb. -Sam

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  8. It would be helpful if we told Caleb what makes is nice, or cool? Miss B

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  9. Fantastic poem Caleb. Jordy

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  10. Great pome Caleb i think its cool how you stuck to the same theam for each verse. It really made the whole pome go nice and smoothly. Kirsten

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  11. Kool poem caleb. Anna

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  12. Wow, thats an awesome poem caleb!!. Greer

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