Friday, 13 May 2011

Super Simile Poems

A snake has beady eyes like a villain from a children’s book.
Its pointed nose is sharp like the beak of a chook.
A snake is as slimy as soap is when wet.
Its rattle is about as scary as they get.

A snake is as long as a rope.
Its smell is as good as a blood hound; you’d have no hope.
A snake is as scaly as a fish,
and as stealth as a hunters on a hunt for his dish.
By: Lucy



A dolphin is as playful as a child.
A dolphins eyes are as bright and shiny as jewels.
A dolphins tail is as strong as a elephant in the wild.
A dolphins teeth are as white and perfect as pearls.

A dolphins snout is like a beer bottle.
A dolphins is as streamlined as an Olympic swimmer.
A dolphin is as fast as a boat on full throttle.
A dolphin is grey like the sky on a rainy day.

By: Anna


My bird

Her feathers are yellow like the sun bright.
Her eyes are as dark as the moon light.
Her tail is as long as a snails trail.
Her claws are as sharp as a nail.

She sits on her perch all day, like a bat.
Like a peacock she fluffs up her feathers, which make her look fat.
Her beak is long and sharp, like rabbits teeth.
She is similar to a chicken, but she is my bird Bella.
By: Kalyssa.

5 comments:

  1. These poems are fantastic. Your writing helps me paint a realistic picture in my mind with your awesome descriptions. Have you illustrated your poems, if so bring them along to Room 8 so that I can see if your drawings match the ones in my mind. Mrs Lee

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  2. I really like all the poems. They have great similes!!! Logan!!!

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  3. I love your poem about Bella!!
    Lucy

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  4. hello Room 2 - Love the poems and the artwork! Keep up the good work. Gina

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  5. awesome thxs for helpin! lucy :D

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